You Still didnt do the problems i listed dude
Put a black box or something behind your text! I can barely read it! Second the guy says GO THE LIGHT IS GREEN, when it was CLEARLY Red.
Add more music and stuff, i doubt this is anything like Sonic X so im assuming its like "Sex and the city"
Why the heck did you use the sonic spinball gif when he gets out of the water? Thats like two diffrent looks!
But mainly, PUT SOMETHING BEHIND THE TEXT! ITS DRIVING ME NUTS! I can barely read the damn thing!
P.S in your first one, knux said, step aside HONEY. -_-
Please take this advice instead of ignoring it, because i know what im talking about!
6/10
3/5
-BlackDevilX - you can still do better