Score: 10

"Temper Temper Long Exponent"

submission: The Ness Collab

date: October 31, 2009

GET IT CUZ UR NAME IS SHORT FACTOR

Score: 10

"Well Well Well!!!"

submission: Super Mario bros Z ep.8

date: October 10, 2009

After many criticisms of your series, i have to admit that THIS right here is your best yet! Sure it may not be very clean graphically and all that goodness, but by god i love the creativity you put into this one!

For some reason, i found the dialogue in this one much more appealing than your other ones. I was actually wrapped into the story for this episode. I dont know if you changed how you write, or better expressed how the characters are feeling but man, you seriously did a great job. You nailed all your timings and reactions for humor. You didn't let anything drag out and you actually kept true to each characters personalities.

I have always liked sprite artist to use other methods of animating in their work, and i am really glad you used vector and 3d in your flash as much as you did. Also in the amount of time it took you to make this one it clearly beats out your others by far. Spend less time on your projects from now on if they turn out like this.

Now the fight scene. I was actually waiting for that one, because to tell you the truth i wasnt expecting anything improved, but you toned it down alot in the effects from last time(at least it seemed) which i am glad because it showed you listen. I have to say, that sonic fire flower thing was freakin clever. When that scene came up an actually excerpt from the chat with short-factor

"BlackDevilX says:
Holy
Shit
Alvin has just reach a new level of respect in my eyes."

After that, it was pretty bad ass. To the point i got chills. Mario doing Kens shin-shoryu-reppa super and all that fun stuff was great man.

Overall, you did one hell of a job on this episode. Just one thing. Keep it up man. I actually saw improvements in this one. Dont fall back into that repetitiveness that i complained about. Now i know you got the talent to do so. Dont get fckin lazy. Dont disappoint me man.

5/5
10/10
-BlackDevilX

Score: 10

"Deep."

submission: Jackie

date: March 22, 2009

Normally, I don't review animations, but i decided to break from my mold and give this one a review.

There was something about this movie that i cant explain. I didn't find it very funny, but to me, I dont think it was meant to be funny completely. For the first time in a flash movie I actually felt bad for her, and got mad at her, and got a bit happy for her. I loved the fact that none of the characters talked (not including the a few lines here and there) but still told the story. Not a lot of people can do that, yet you pulled it off wonderfully. I think most people who reviewed this flash didn't get a deeper meaning to it, all they saw was stupid facial expressions, and the funny parts.

For some reason, this movie also reminded me a bit of Requiem for a Dream. Perhaps you have seen it?

Then again, this is just my opinion, but nevertheless, great job. This is definitely one of my favorites from you so far.

5/5
10/10
-BlackDevilX